Dart With Destiny, Status: Completed

I can't show it in its entirety sadly, such are agreements with my partner and the site we're posting it to, but I can show parts of it.

Page Four

Page 10

Page Five

Here's a few of the pages in random order and a bit of commentary.

Page Four:
Probably my favorite page of them all because it's the most quality of them all at least in my view. Other than the Fabbrician and the wonky perspective I can't see how I can do much else to bolster this page.

Page Ten:
Panels three and four disappoint me. The pencils were nearly identical other than the head turn that the man takes when he faced Glen aka Mr. Stubbles. I thought "hey, seeing as he turns his head his clothes have to follow suit!" So I made some adjustments in the inking, and then came the realization that it won't work and how that spoiled my confidence in my inking and made me fuck the placement of the fine liner I was inking with.... it was just TRAGIC. Now it's very different and it spoiled what I was going for. Oh well...

Page Five:
Panel six (the last one, the inset panels within and between panels I count as full panels in their own right here) was cut out and replaced. Seems pretty seamless here.